Coreeee. I think the text needs work...there are so many different styles going on, especially the back...it looks a little jumbled. Jason always talks about aligning everything one one side of the text. I like the image you chose, and the title. I feel like your name on the front should be closer to the font above it perhaps?
Other than the typography everything looks peachy keen to me!
i like the handwriting. i say go with that. and maybe under this roof on the second part doesn't need to be full bleed. as much as it is important i don't think the date and time should stand out the most. i love u
Coreeee. I think the text needs work...there are so many different styles going on, especially the back...it looks a little jumbled. Jason always talks about aligning everything one one side of the text. I like the image you chose, and the title. I feel like your name on the front should be closer to the font above it perhaps?
ReplyDeleteOther than the typography everything looks peachy keen to me!
i like the handwriting. i say go with that. and maybe under this roof on the second part doesn't need to be full bleed. as much as it is important i don't think the date and time should stand out the most. i love u
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